This was wonderful! I've never had the chance to see the Fullmetal Alchemist, but just from your fic, I can see why you enjoy it. The connection between the brothers is wonderful, and I I really enjoyed both of their characters, especially that quiet, accepting way that Al supports Ed. It reminded me of the television show Supernatural that way, with a different, but strong dynamic between the brothers. I also loved the way you contrasted the light and the dark. Amazing, amazing work as always! :)

I also wanted to mention, I haven't forgotten about posting your Fullmetal Alchemist fics on NOTW, and I would still love to (especially after reading this one! :) ) I just have to find the time, lol! I started college on Monday and I'm incredibly busy right now. I'm hoping I'll have some time to work on it soon. :)

-Laughter